Thank you all so much for the reading today. Everyone was amazing and it as so fun to hear a voice connected to the characters in my head. The feedback was wonderful too. Every time there was a laugh, I put a check mark next to the line on my copy and I am grateful that there were lots of check marks. I am looking forward to rewriting this weekend and fixing some of the things you all suggested. And thank you also for the feedback on the ending and Donna's connection to the real Derek.
Big thanks to Ralph and Stephen for joining the cast as the narrator and Derek. You were great. I am so excited to see how this is coming together.